(Jon hit me up on kik, “You have a track I could keep?” “...”
I’m not sure what I expected, when he ‘asked to get beat’.)
Good, but the double meaning isn’t grammatically correct both ways.
ya fkin dead. NCG’s pull the heat & ur gettin fried.
bring em to the real green, only thing he’ll recognize is two K’s next to his i.
I’d say this is better than Bongo’s opener
(“Can I have it for free? I wrote up a flame chorus!”
Homie had me vengeful, like “YOU’RE GONNA PAY FOR THIS!!!”)
Good
ya bitch a sloth, where y’all from girls got menacing looks.
cuz the only achievable quality she got is having the best neck of the woods.
But once again I’d rank this better,
(Told em, “Push some snow on the street!”, “Like winter lawn work?”
“Nah, it means if ‘L.E.N aint breaking out ‘Kane’, I’m gettin ‘John Hurt!’”)
This ones a career highlight,
body this fagt rook. U ain’t a target or top threat.
bear weak with da hands.. explains why his punches still ain’t sharp yet.
And I think this is definitely worse than Bongo’s 3rd couplet, tho it’s not too bad.
(The mag said I would lose? I’m taking 3 with this fight.
Cred knew Len’s crew is dead; a ‘Killing Spree on his side.)
Good
I’ll leave your wounds deep, I’m a maniac with sharp blades.
pain e’ll be gruesome, act like u can Barrett n’ ill blow ur legs off from long range.
Good, but not as good as Bongo’s countering couplet.
(Grizz n’ Triple made mistakes by thinking i’m real stupid
like Wild Bill in Green Mile; John's executed in these bars right after I killed two kids.)
Haven’t seen Green Mile, so idg the reference, I assume it’s on point tho.
Street disciple. Kill u either way bro u can choose the style.
Tactical gat, leave survival tips in Bear Grylls or he’s Running Wild
But with that being said gotta give the 6th couplet to Jon
(It ain't a John the Baptist bible - this a boxing match for titles;
‘bear’ll be quick to shoot those rounds’ like i'm a automatic rifle.)
Now I’ve seen you do similar plays on your name, so minus points for that, but still good.
then I’m dumpin evidence, no leads or traction.
smokin bong, then proceed to load bowls with his fkin ashes.
And I feel Jon lost his chain of momentum here if you know what I mean. It’s good but thatplays been done like three times by Bongo in one night, so it’s starting to lose all value.
(Black said, “I gotta stick by your side like a loyal friend” I thought, “Ofcourse that shit was flame-
but if I was Black; I'd never be friends with this wannabe gangbanger who appropriates the Slang.”)
Pretty good
I’m snuffing fakes, roll to ur crib with brass knux sanitized.
Acting like ur incredible 2.. fagt, I’ll put black around ur entire families eyes.
But I like this one better
(You left kik for netcees, you think DMS or Teddy care?
You’re too fat to fit in jeans, what made your ugly ass think that you'd fit in, anywhere?)
I heard some stuff about Bongo sharing a screen cap here, I’d already seen that message screen cap on Kik. Jon didn’t seem to not like it there. But just basing this judgment on The verses, I’d have to say it’s a damn good line.
Ur homies all gay lovers, eyebrows raise when you call them brothers.
This ain’t a game of tag, but your entire life is spent with men touching each other.
Funny but not as good as Bongos ender.
Now in this case I feel just tallying up the ‘couplets’ isn’t good enough. Quality over quantity.
Looking at both verses highlights, and memorability. I’d say Bongo gets it. Now I’m also I multi boi. And Bongo has way better multis.
V/Bongo
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