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Originally Posted by DynamiCz
No help with this, have them transport the body to a medical agent
Choppers on ya building, then I unload on the pad like a airlift patient
Setup nice, punch nice. Overall, nice.
I draw the master piece up, then do my best work with the pistol
Fam mourning when one arm waving the flame thru the air-that's a candle light vigil
A little bit of stretch. Decent though.
Extra mags for the clip! Public defender running through these new cases
Two straps serve you, when ya chest halfway exposed it ain't a hooter waitress
Decent
You probably heard already, in this league I been named a threat
Grab the gun from the desk top, one click let the chrome open up-google internet
This was pretty nice. I like how you brought the line back to netcees sort of.
Thought I needed help? PGA Tourney, the iron I'm toting around a nine
Had the work applied for, his brains hanging from the window-Now Hiring Sign
Good concept. Execution was decent.
You get the fade early, I can show him the gate upstairs ain't pearly
Make this tom a hawk! Have it laid sideways across ya shirt like a braves jersey
Wording could be better. Maybe? I can't think of anything right now but, this is a good ending line.
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Ugghhhh passed out here’s a verse
Tic and you must've crawled out of the same bed lol.
Listen faggit
Lucky mag mention, tho there’s nothing this lame pull
Zelph threw his pen in the kitchen, You should stab urself For the shit u bring to the table
If the setup was on point, this would've hit alot harder.
Your top kills don’t compare to my Shy murdas . I’m a quiet death force
Takem2school NS’in the only reason U ever got Cred for
Nice
You
Have u Hush’d for a DollaSign...u the lamest bitch
Show U the way my Knucks do damage! S’whye u’ll never take the Vic
Wasn't feeling this one.
Plus I stuff ur wife on a full stomach... U mad I can hit quicker
Want break up just hear the Whine N Dine cos I fucked her & didn’t have to buy the bitch dinner
This is pretty nice.
& she stays awake when I Smash, She will not push me
Shed be sorry for the Slip Miks, but that’s originally how You got pussy
Ok.
Pull up, shoot on him & the clique till they dead, and rot
Slaughter every Bari post so he never even gets back into a contention spot
Good idea to end your verse with a sting.
Felt like one was alot more developed and solid. Either the opponent didn't have the time, or didn't take the time. This was a decent battle; not close by a hair but, it was relatively close I think. Both could improve on making connections in the lines.
V/DynamiCz