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Old 06-23-2018, 05:34 PM   #8
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Originally Posted by Barcotic View Post
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ima trash this fan w/ hands. the cat dont stand a chance
peep the headline for confirmation, 'tic aint even half the man i am

Nice nameplay.

im a fucking saaaaaaaavage. iont really have to clown hard
ur waist aint Golden Tickets obvious the prize'll be wrapped around bars

Good nameplay to a movie reference. Nice.

haters BASH mike but i throw fast rights & land flush w heads
expectations Roseanne Barr promises u wont Act, Write or Stand-Up again

I like how the ending was phrased but, the concept itself feels underdeveloped in this bar.

a cross'll surly knock ya pearlies missin. drop u early, pimpin
if i connect w/ a-lip,-tic'll be trying to walk in the same spot for 30 minutes

Lmao, this is nice. Solid wordplay.


plus we the street sort, my team sports pieces to splatter ock
we'll send enough metal thru this square for 3 more seasons of battlebots

I was just watching a couple of battlebot videos yesterday and thought "If I had a bar about this people are never going to get this nerdy ass reference." Then I see this. Lol. Props for the reference. It's a nice punch.

ur missing with ur nonsense. im thinking ur a novice, cousin
u dropped the Baltic, Sea ur way out before ur sinking to the bottom of it

Wordplay is nice, decent punch. Wording can make it better.

said u was gone for a year?! dork, wth.. bored w yaself, yes?
either take another Breaker make sure it works n put a fork in an
outlet

A little weak here imo. But, the whole verse was mad consistent. Nice read.

My bad for being late, fell asleep.

Faggot complains for Sport, I sweaaaar this kid is gay
He doesn't just Catch Feelings, he'll turn the most amazing Triple Play

This is pretty good. Kinda has a twist to it. Nice creativity.

AR15s & Rifles. Pray to the lord w/ ya soul
Cross the Line ‘n have Arms Rip ya Family Apart like border patrol

Nice


And in chats...? Amen continues to clown you, I witnessed the proof
The way he Conjure Ass like watching a Haunted Twerk on continuous loop

Lmao. I didn't really feel this but, I appreciate the originality. Multi's on point to.

I'll spark you out in the open, what I'm totin is mean
The cannon take ya White head off...That's Exfoliant cream

Solid.

Let's talk execution cuz that's where we're mismatched, sport
Wordplay Comin Out of the 'Woodwork' ---> to holy shit that's forced

Light.

I'm reachin New Heights. You I passed over
If you're reaching New Heights it's adjusting the blade on ya grass mower

This is ok. A little underdeveloped but it's solid.

Csn it ya jerk, when I put hands on this twerp
There will be so much blood it'll spaekcan Amber aler

Lmao, hard to type when you just woke up aint it? The ending is good. Would've tried to developed this a little more. It still holds up either way imo.

This was a good battle. I was surprised at the creativity of both battlers. My vote goes to the battler who was more consistent/diverse throughout punch wise.

V/Barcotic
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