blue:
kids garbage, never droppin something newish & fresh..
so if i'm sayin 'Chaud’s' Hot it's only cuz i'm fluent in French
nice def one of my favs so far in my battle history..
Wither Away just to match what ya talent has done
nice also
Marble was wet
nice word play..
Schadenfreude:
best line
put a gastric bypass ring on it.
structure in general was hot very punchline driven and compact..
vote =Schadenfreude
better battle style verse less open mic creative spin on character - more direct punches.. good luck
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