ur comps low tier nobodies > the reason no one believes in him.
Cuz the only spree u faced last week was the continuation of easy wins.
(Dang this has potential but you need to do a bit more with this for it to land)
robbin voters of their time, u got a tedious style that reeks shit.
think iTunes remastered albums.. cuz all he does is take a dated concept & tweaks it
(Hmmm okay. This was decent)
show up to his fgt rave w/ guns & army apparel.
yea, u can drop acid.. but there’s only one color comin out the barrel.
(Not bad. Had to read this again. The wording probably wasn’t as concise as it should have been which made it a bit harder to understand but I’m seeing some creativity)
Karate kicks. I can either crush his skull or take his chin.
Put his ghost in the air, I’m stompin’ Soles on the ground till I break em in
(Like the concept again. The execution was off though)
Stop talkin like u bang guns when u're begging for male snapchats
Nigga, the only strap u've worn was going to school on ur backpack
(Too basic imo. Gotta get more creative than this)
Unemployed since ya dropped out, u'll never be a winner dude
Let's be real...Even Veritas ignored your application for an interview
(This was a pretty funny personal)
I'm Yoel Romero w/ the right. One punch might break ya jaw
If we square up I'll beat Lentil he's sipping that soup through a straw
(This is pretty good. The wp came off nice)
N I won't hesitate if u try to test, Gang life when I whip out the tecs
U'll wish u was locked up when u see the strap on my ankle like house arrest
(Good as well. Could have executed it a bit better. The ‘wish you was locked up’ part seems forced just for the tie in. Overall this was pretty cool though)
Fairly close but Twodrop did enough to get the dub. Lenox has been improving. The concepts have been getting better and better. I think you just gotta polish up your wording because you had the more creative concepts imo - just gotta make your punches come off cleaner.
Two drop has been flying under the radar but you’ve been locked in recently. I don’t think the 8 line battles play to your strengths but you were able to bring a personal, nice little clever wp, and your punches landed a bit harder.
Mvgt: Twodrop
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