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Old 06-17-2018, 03:23 AM   #8
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Catch him at the studio! I got plans to have you permanently snoozing
Fresh pack, I keep a coo stick! Shots spread Black across the wall like soundproofing
OK here, could have been nice but I felt it was forced
You hallucinate! Make ya character see illusions where death send ya
Fire at his face! In disorder I can fuck up his speech & thinking-schizophrenia
i wanted to like this cause I get it but I wasn’t feein it bru, kinda forced here as well
Think its a game? I'm zombie walking through the house w/ this heavy K
Let off shots! Then watch heart plague fall out a dead guy..thats State Of Decay
i think the wording in the second line was off, if not I just didn’t get the bolded portion
The gun transform! I'll have it standing on wheels when i aim the shot
When 4 arms on the machine waving at the flesh, it ain't a Da Vinci Robot
alright this was cool, could have finished smoother but nonetheless I liked it
Thought you could eat in public! Fuck the chicken plate when the eagle on ya
Birds flying until the wings spread out on ya shirt-Hollister California
idk if it’s just my quality of imagination but if this is what I think it means....then this is bonkers....NICEE
You in a bender, guns on each side i can slide the clip like it's Tinder
Red beams left to right on his outfit-resemble buttons on chucky suspenders
nahhh
They predicted me a slim chance, disrespected me like your gun bars to advance
In Atl you a buckhead resident! The closest JB will get to Shoot-is a Blocboy dance
lol made me laugh. Decent here
Glock beside me modified, you let them amp you up! Now you in the way of harm
The metal gauntlets flash on the side of his temple like Thanos Arm
alright

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This’ll be Frieza vs Goku...when Frieza tried to win by blowing the planet up/
Translation: Win or lose, this battle will fuck Namek up/
lol damn this was creative af, good nameplay. I liked this bar a lot
You road kill. Drive by in the old DeVille. I’m in the fo’ door letting the fo’ peel/
If this hoe live? Come right back n ‘get another shot at the champ’...Flo Real/
this would have been good in a SnF verse but it’s exacrly that, loses impact. Decent here
The ‘desert flipping shit’ like a tumble weed when I burst eagles/
Or I’ll lift the Smith...and have it ‘pointed at ya roof’ like a church steeple/
alright
The shit I’m blaming leaving heavy damage. Ya whole chest open when I aim shells/
Bystanders’ll ‘C in the middle of DynamiCz’ like how ya dumbass name spelled/
nah wasn’t feelin this
This the End of the Road. I’m letting the four sing like Boys II Men/
Or a K to ya ribcage...‘I gotta stick by ya side’ like a loyal friend/
yoooooooooooo this was fucking crazy. DOPE & sigged
Catch you in traffic and slump ya quick. Leave ya head hanging from ya whip/
After the Mac spit - ya wig falling out the window on some Rapunzel shit/
mmm decent, had potential for more if you had done it a bit differently
Send shooter to ya crib. Snipers in the grass - fully prone to keep the scope stable/
My niggas laying on the ground with the arms waving...they making snow angels/
this line looks familiar but I can’t put a finger on it. Aside from that this was nice
But we don’t really need slugs. Pull up with a bat and start smashing D’s mugs/
Now his cranium cracked with his eyes ‘hanging out the socket’ like a febreeze plug/
fabreese plug has eyes? I don’t get this lol


Pretty good battle guys. I’m impressed with a lot of these lines and concepts. You both are dope and creative and it’s only up from here. Both had quality lines and misses as wel. I have Jabari with the better lines though, stick by ya side like a loyal friend was so fuckin fire like damn smh. This could be close but.


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