wack faggt, twodrop showed you the grave.
musta been tweakin when ya wrote that verse. Cuz u lost to a nigga who openly goes to raves.
(Wasn’t enough sting on this one. Saying you lost to someone who goes in raves isn’t harsh enough)
Ya careers been over, roll to ya crib cuz u were fakin jax.
Once the doors open, blastin. Like broke niggas makin wax.
(Sorry but I didn’t understand this one)
my arms out when I hit those tunes, act foul and the clip go boom
I’ll be waving the deuce across your face more than any disco move.
(HA I like this one)
I don’t respect the old, Lenox ruthless N loose with the trigga,
Aim straight at Griseldas, & let the gun doot doot on them niggas.
(Let the gun doot doot on them niggas is funny af. Unfortunately, Twodrop had a Griselda blanco line last week. This the same feed I gave two: I’m not a fan of this because you wouldn’t say ‘Grizz elder’ outside of this line)
U got the faggot Genes, it’s hereditary, no ones second guessin.
But the glock do my sins for me., one click & you’ll get sent to a different dimension
(I didn’t get this reference)
I’ve took mad lives with the gat & yet to be caught.
Catch me outside ya crib bangin the choppa more than the Incredible Hulk.
(This was just okay. Needed a bit more)
This verse had its ups and downs. Admittedly I missed some references. I typically google any bar I don’t get but since it was a n/s I didn’t for this verse.
You def had some stuff you can build on. I like the disco line so more on that and keep building on it. Based on just this verse, I think your biggest thinking will be spending more time coming up with creative concepts and more time crafting out the wording and complexity of the bars.
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