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Old 06-10-2018, 08:18 AM   #9
Jabari Black
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Join Date: Mar 2018
Location: Atlanta, GA
Posts: 550
Battle Record: 13-6


Champed
- Battle Arena League
- 1-2 Punch League
- Netcees Battle League
- Netcees SOL

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fuck every paper champ who hides behind anonymity & tricks
You’d think with a name that means dickless, ur squad would have less dicks

(I didn’t care for this one. The punch wasn’t hard enough)

Find another site to post on? des would be astounded
But this Bourdain for u - I have no reservations to let u be found dead

(Haymaker! This was dope)

Name reigns supreme. known for evil deeds and being high strung
Who can handle inf? Uh, me. Cause I live in it & it’s what u will die from

(This was cool. The wp itself was cool but the set up brought everything together. That’good writing)

take these claws to ur throats, cats leaving ripped in half
Cudi is a monster so when it’s over, Kids see Ghosts of both inf & cash

(This was just okay. The punch was a bit too basic imo)

Y’all know I’m Hispanic which means I’m full of hate & violence
gimme a gun & I’m goin nuts… yall get lost in translation cuz in Spanish the H is silent

(I tried my hardest but I missed this one)

Inf bein carried but wont know it till we tussle with the victims
Idgaf if Cash is known for liftin cuz my finger’s repetition gives ya more muscle definition

(I see where you going but this is between a miss and an very very light jab)

Talk about me all u want like a bitch u do shit the gay way
I figured out ya combination… Cash doesn’t post personal shit to make sure he stays safe

(The punch wasn’t crazy. Safe/combo is basic but that’s a good personal. This landed)

Inf’s 1st tourney win’s a fake; my haters wanted me to lose, son
beggin Joe for $50 was a poor sign… & u in China town with a will text for food one

(Lol this was funny. I liked the personal angles too. Nothing crazy but solid closer)




That's dope Nik! Ya time'll free up when u dudes get trampled..
But what's real salty & a bitch to maintain is your activity after losing battles

(Lol this is nice)

The stick’s I’m grippin’ spit for distance...Shit is gettin’ grim.
I got a big machine that’s gonna put a body on a body...This Pacific Rim

(This is pretty nice as well)

It's Top Grade vs some odd lames...Trophy already in OUR names
Grab a Canaan walk to the podium, yall been finishin last since the Bronze Age

(Hmm, the Cannan wp was is pretty slick and I get how it ties into the Bronze Age but that may be too obscure of a reference. This is decent. Clever though)

Des, why’d the Lord give your wife A cups? Son, your chick is way scrawny
It’s like deja vu for you...Cuz this is the gawd giving another bitch a Straight Body

(This is pretty good. I like it)

Bitch was quick...One Tug in the bath & he was sendin me death threats
How she pulled a monster snake from underwater made her your Deadliest Catch Yet

(This was just okay. I don’t actually watch deadliest catch so I might have missed a tie in, but just from what I was able to catch I didn’t think it was enough to tie in to the ‘Deadliest Catch Yet’ part)

Nik’s spic Mom’s a maid for caucasians. Clean towels, pillow chocolate...making it regal
The way she Turns Down that White House, you would think the bitch played for the Eagles

(The punch felt forced on this one, particularly the ‘Turns down that white house’ phrase. Didn’t care for this one)

Now we got Nik talking about shooting guns LOL. You lyin, just can it yo...
Only time we’ll see a bitch’s Burner Account for a Firing was Bryan Colangelo

(This was pretty cool. My only critique is you wouldn’t call a shooting a ‘firing’. You had enough here to compensate for that though. Overall I think the line was good)

And if ya'll survive here? Natural Order see
you faggots dead sooner..
Fuckit, 'Something Old' CAN'T even guarantee DMS a battle in the Near Future

(This was light)



I enjoyed this battle. It’s dope seeing 4 elite battlers go at it.

Very close battle but I got Cash and Inf taking this by just a bar.

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