[bleak]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

aka Zelph
aka For Battling



Excuse me officer...
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guys a shy pre-cumming virgin that'll NEVER get to hump w/ a rocket..
soon as a bitch says Hey...Zel Nuts in his pants & he ainttt got none in his pocket
^ tryna hype ya Cavs line boyyy the lines that u say are shit..
the GOAT let down by his teammate.. NOW we’re realllllly talkin J R Smith
wont quote em hes wack, drops shit this battle's over it's FACT..
i don't think this Piglatin but his wordings so bad u'd SWEAR he wrote it in that
you're bitchmade but i'll have Shotty's loaded in the van incase..
cuz i'll admit, when it pops-off ur the first one Sprayin'….. a can of Mace
-- I like shit like this

Never saw any connection between Zelph and Jay
Foreclosure doesn't work cause no one would call him For I like this concept tho
Idk man the second half kinda fell off I found myself less invested, which never happens in your verses.

Originally Posted by GUDELJ

Blue a vet? Bro pls.. I got just the thing to expose this old geek
Then he’ll wanna Sudafed only because he’s been on a cold streak
Pull up to ur crib w/ killaz. U claimed u were rdy but I knw u were bluffin
the whole crew rides deep blue, see? I’ll have my sharks eat u for nothin
My hoes ready to squeeze. All I gta do is relay the text
Then it’s the Nina.. going off in ur face like an angry ex!
-- lol this is barely making it but it made me laugh
BIG GUNS. I let it go and watch the heat soar
Unique roar.. then the machine turns into an animal like beast wars
You date the nastiest of whores, my bros run trains & lay pipe
Bro, that hoes been gettin tagged so much we started callin her Amens wife

Sudafed LOTB this verse was solid and Zelph seems motivated. I'm always pretty liberal w/ quotes, I got Z by a good margin