Ffs just lookin at Bleak an the feeling of vomit increases
Such a fat slob if he ate Witherspoon its to swallow more Reeses peices
(Lol I want to hate on this so bad but it’s kinda funny. My critique is that the Reese Witherspoon has no tie in and the wp wasn’t perfect. I’m letting this slide. This was okay)
Fuck me, you three look like you're your own fuckin species
Wit cargos cut off at the knee like she'll be when her legs lose to diabetes
(Lol this one was funny)
might throw heavy in RL but in text you aint even a scratch kid
stomach more suckered in than you agreein to makin this match pics
(Decent. Funny. Could be a geographical thing but here, you would say “sucked in” not “suckered it”. I still get the point though)
Cus im mad slick, so how would i ever lose to some fat bitch
Shiiit... even that band on your wrist looks like its probably gastric
(Lol not bad. Jab but I liked it)
You a Holdor lookin faggot, no wonder you struggle writing
When he said "honeycomb over" he didnt mean he wanted her hair like it!
(HA! Nigga clowning now! This is pretty dope)
N i cant even tell if that was a lake n yall had jus jumped in
Or if those water marks jus the dribble that you had to wipe off her chin
(I like the attempt to incorporate something in the background but this one missed. The execution was off on this one)
10 for Slytherin? Prof. McG with sticks, I will cease this Flow scam.
&&&THESE 10 points are hollow...THIS^^ is if Hogwarts was a rehab program
(This was okay. The execution hurt this one. I appreciate the attempt to punch in the setup but you tried to do too much with too little space and it felt really scattered. Not sure what the 10 points refer to. The punch wasn’t crazy but it saved the bar imo)
Might as well be German fags, alchy twinks need vests that sparkle
visit THEIR part of Europe to find that sausage &beer goes best when gargled
(My b but I’m missing something here. I don’t get what sausage and beer goes best when gargles refers to)
Won't beat around the bush, I'll put face to brick &son this maggot
I'd go straight for the neck but there is barely 1 amongst these faggots
(Lol nice)
You look lost, bud. Like they forced you here to be creepy vultures
Straight facts: This looks like the poster to warn against campus rape culture
(Lmao facts. I like this one too)
I welcome ocks with arms, my creed is to smother opposition
You faggots got Arms Wide Open in prep for a Creed cover competition
(Dang I thought you could have done something way better than this. The concept itself was a but weird and I don’t think it was executed the best)
My submission was a perfect vista. You sent an early 00's soft rock band
I'd say send a Natural Setting to match, but y'all at home w/ fags in all hands
(Concept was pretty clever but I think you fumbled it. The punch just wasn’t there)
I liked this battle. It was pretty close but Flow was consistent enough to squeak out a win. I think Bleak DEFINITELY had the heavier punches but Flow has fewer misses.
I think Bleak is dangerous af. Concepts are there, creative af, and can really land some haymakers but I think you get in your own way some times with the wording and execution.
I think Flow had took a slight step down from his previous two battles but still had a good showing. I think Flow’s biggest obstacle will be being able to produce haymakers when he doesn’t have personal angle on the guy.
Overall good battle. Both y’all niggas had me laughing but Flow Edged it.
Mvgt: Flow
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