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Pharaohs Army · 06-08-2018, 07:18 PM

the last 10 lines of this flowed better than the beginning, I think. the rhyme schemes are easier to see.

you've got alcoholic beverages and women again, but hey, it was a nice read.

06-08-2018, 07:18 PM	#1
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	the last 10 lines of this flowed better than the beginning, I think. the rhyme schemes are easier to see. you've got alcoholic beverages and women again, but hey, it was a nice read.