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Pharaohs Army · 06-08-2018, 07:05 PM

the first half of this was really good... right up until "lived in before". You should end it right there, because after that it looks like you keyed the rest and the rhymes weren't nearly as good as the first half.

06-08-2018, 07:05 PM	#15
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	the first half of this was really good... right up until "lived in before". You should end it right there, because after that it looks like you keyed the rest and the rhymes weren't nearly as good as the first half.