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Old 06-01-2013, 01:34 PM   #2
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Originally Posted by CopyPat View Post
I posted this a while back on old netcees. I don't think people really got what i was tryin to do tho.. haha





You lack the syllables and sciences, stylin that I’m rhymin with
Fuck who that I offend, rappers sit back I’m bout to begin

the fuck who that i offend part kinda stuck out to me as in didnt flow as well as im used to from you

Bout how soft you talk, sweet like chocolate sauce
More less the methods are in question, never been aggressive
My lyrics will manifest anything that’s raw worth a verse about
All told purposely, never blurted out

lol@chocolate sauce.. liked this last line too

What’s in the future for stupid entertainers? Rappers are in danger
Who will resist when I’m the changer?
When the spit flies and sprays, to blow you outta the game
Some will keep their ignorance, and some will be saved
The same suckers with they asses out
Really it stinks, cause your shit and I ain’t down with the crap
That you be drippin, the honest flowa
Rappin the best and I know I’m dope-a


i liked this part up until the aint down with crap line, it just didnt flow to me

Real rhymes sucka, the repercussions might choke ya
Always pity you clowns
Verses blatantly rotten, what you consider as sickness
To me this is just a clinic
I feel I own, not cause I taught the way to crap talk
The more emotion I put into it the harder I rock
Those who flow miserable, I really ain’t feelin you

Their time’s limited, hard rocks too
Their time’s limited, hard rocks too


you ended that verse nicely, dug it

Legally dumb, about how much you sick but you never won it
I’m in it to win it, the best man to lay tracks and spit this flyness
I find it the finest. Cause each verse is strategized
The most tightest out bust the average guys
I’m fed up with the bull, on this focus of penis dicks
And cocks gettin jocked, and that’s just bein a bitch

i reeaally enjoyed this part fam


It’s the same old same old, gay vote on the table
The long texts are not hot yet or fresh
So why you pushin it?
Why you rhyming for? You know when you spit
You know you choke, you just a dud and you miss
Your façades a problem
That you rely on in rhyme duels and rapping spats
You post horrible threats relax

eh, this was ok, just not up to par with your usual

What’s her face told me she rocked a spit last week at the bar
That’s a lie.. it wasn’t her in the song
See i know ho’s, I go to shows, images is blown
Guys be rappin, I begin all laughin.. just a joke
Of course I got up and left, the honeys were vexed, but uhhh
I’de rather be dope then have a whole lot of this sex

nah nigga, sex is important lol


It’s the principle of it, I get enough of these sluts
With both thighs open, and baby ya body is smoke
That’s why I’m considered real in this field I do it
My head is puttin brain cells to work creatin’ music

dope

Non-professional, Ya’ll is vegetables
Everybody’s either rhyme sedated or technical
I’m here to save the business, and rhyme all with sickness
To tracks I’m off rippin, rappin all different
For those who flow miserable, I really ain’t feelin you


solid closer

ok so i did enjoy this but i do not think it was up to standards with what i typically see from you flow was, i know i put a lot of emphasis on flow here but thats only because you've set a point in your previous pieces that im accustomed to, but i did enjoy this and feel its being slept on, peace
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