Quick 1 here for the league I don't feel like waiting for battles to go up.
Muff you said it took 21 mins or something to key this and it shows, you had some decent stuff in here but I can tell that u were focused on tag shit. I think it hurt u and brought u to a level where JB could steal one.
JB that no show line was nice and should be a benchmark for what u should write every time. It's simple but simple works here if it's presented correctly. Numbers shit was a good try but it's hella long. Other than that everything was consistent and solid, this the best verse I 've read and getting better every week
Muff I think u dropped the ball on this one. I think you knew you were done with the league anyways but wanted to show, which I commend. But I got JB here his verse was really good this week
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Me vs you only if that’s what it takes.
Battle to the death
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