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Old 06-01-2013, 10:45 AM   #8
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Im blowin on Candy Weed. Sex on over drive cuz i be makin Panties Bleed,
once I stick my cam shaft in ya girl Pussy That Bitch Overheat Quicker then a Car With No AntiFreeze.
Ur plot dont Fool me fucker in shock enough to make a Newly stutter,
ill leave megatron covered in flames quicker then burning a transformers movie cover.
You almost lost last week & i could tell by ur style that ya Such a Fairy,
Keep Walking Around With Pryde & ya both could do a remake for the movie Chuck & Larry.

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My niggas is ninja type no glocks, they use swords to give ya bitch a bunch of scars
The violence wont stop, when they see u you'll get chopped.,Like ya dish wasn't up to par
I tote. Guns w. Heavy kickback, I bet he soil his pants when I get the choppa
Cuz the only thing poppin is Recoil..in the pan when he frying up some empanadas

OK battle here although I feel as if megatron definitely did not try at all. I've seen ya drop so much better than this in previous weeks, which is cool, but it's all about consistency my dude. Your wording was all over the place and the verse was choppy. I understood where you were going with most of ya concepts, but definitely could've came a lot more correct. As far as R!can went though, a lot more up to par. You have some cool concepts but definitely feel like their missing a bit of impact that most dope punches should have. Or a bit more wit. Can't put my finger on it, but I see a lot of potential in your verses.

V/ R!canTheroyz
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