FGR does PCP, that's why there's nothing special bout his list
a drug addicted, thug thats spit hits? but cant handle this substance
Vs
i'll body beat this fuck w/ visious blows!! dropping you is a breeze
when i lay so many combos into ur stomach u'll get sick of cheddar cheese
his whole squads a bunch of fags..pull out ya dick n there quick to go south
look at his ava..there bout to fight for something dangling in front of there mouth
Got FGR taking this pretty easily. GKillaZ, please review some old battles or go to the tutoring section to learn how to properly connect ya punches. I see you have a concept on how to battle, but it's all about connecting set-ups to punch lines. On top of that, bringing in some wit. FGR, you did pretty decent for the match up. Definitely enough for the win. Your opener was corny but I definitely laughed at it. Keep bringing concepts in like that, maybe word them a bit more harsh and you'll have a good run in the league. But watch out for played concepts. Like your "spring break" and "mauled" lines. Been done before. Plus if ya gonna flip an old concept, gotta make it fresher than it's predecessors. Not bad tho.
V/ FGR
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