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Old 06-04-2018, 03:13 AM   #7
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I lold after I got to Annie are you OK.

I stopped there to say is this towards someone?
I thought it was a story that was unfolding then pow it took an offroad route
dope shit littered in here regardless.
i feel like you have an accent of some sort for this wording.
the flow is pretty smooth though, choppy in the beginning but straightened out later on.
dope shit
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