This is whats missing in the OM, I really enjoyed this piece.
the wordplay is on point even if some of it is the obvious.
regardless its enjoyable to me, I like the whole flow of this.
the wording was great all around, really worth the read.
No optometrist could see the pupils shrink when they’re next to a kingpin
Needles sink in...vain, made my name shippin opiates in an empty ink pen
I really liked how you put this together..nice work.
keep it up
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