[Mr. J]

there was no need to deny it, my head was going crazy from not
having anything to occupy it, started thinkin suicide, I guess I wanted it over, I guess I wanted closure
but somethin stopped it, yeah I guess thats kind of a shock then?
took enough pills that it made the beat of my heat thin,
guess god didn't want me to end, huh?

this to the end was pretty good. the other half was meh at best.
it was bouncy though if you trying to record it, I can see it getting spins.
for audio this would have a nice response with a proper beat.
smooth transitioning, the presentation overall is decent, keep writing