falling on back into her tried and tested writing methods.
Sometimes it's best to apply your strengths and find an edge rather than defy convention.
A smile had beckoned on the artists face;
partially raised Chardonnay glass in hand as he marked the day
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I really like how this was written out, impressive work as always
I haven't finished but I had to point out this transition.
The way this was ended was weaved together so neatly I loved it.
I can sense hints of your accent at certain points but it works well
the whole build up of the portrayal is mixed perfectly with your flow.
your storytelling skills are always enjoyable to read as well.
perhaps,
fraught with mishaps and caught in the grasp of writers block as her story unravels.
How awfully tragedian to be caught in a battle you thought you could handle,
only to die by your own sword.
The deadline that she'd hoped for arrived at her closed door.
I really enjoyed this section here too.
what was this for?
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