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Old 06-04-2018, 01:44 AM   #14
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This was impressive, the beginning is a quick stutter step.
the switch up begins to draw me in and you start to fade away.
you lean into that vibe you bringing & then it sinks in...
and you sit there...as the viewer...trying to piece together that shit.
its poetic in its performance & makes one appreciate the profession
your word use is out of left field and could catch one off guard.
it works, i like it, the whole piece is really nice though
thats all I could fathom to say at thsi point
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