This object become a arrow! When you in the bullseye you can't abort
If I get my point across-The bow aimin for the target, this a archery sport
(This missed to me - maybe play at best. I get the bar but i knew what the punchline was going to be way before you said it. I feel like you didn’t know if people would understand it and you overcompensated in the setup.)
Lately your actions been one of a bad actor-Ex champ I get it...You a x factor
Switch up his flow-Shells empty...make contact w/ the spine-chiropractor
(This was okay. Just a jab imo)
One call-I let the tech support if im the one assisting
Blew his brains behind him! Had him thinking in the past like he reminiscing
(Ha creative. I like this one. The ‘thinking in he past’ doesn’t work perfect but I still like it.)
Bad timing, Let it blow in the wind! What you rap ain't surprising
Shoot on top of his head! His figure flying free in the air-that's paragliding
(Yep this is different. Dope concept. It creates a nice visual and it was very well written. Idk the terminology for this, but you can flip really long phrases. ‘Shoot/chute on top of his head! His figure flying free in the air’ is all part of the paragliding flip which is dope. Plus the blow in the wind tie in helped put it together)
Undisputed? lets talk what you accomplish..If I decide to ask
You debate live w/ the sig stuck to ya lip-Shannon Sharpe goat mask
(Ha! Cig/sig is a basic and been done a lot, but the Shannon sharpe reference made it fresher that it normally would have. Decent)
When guard is my position, the wolf howling under the shirt-Jeff Teague
I don't discriminate-Different colors leaking from the gun then a paintball league
(This is good. I think you made a typo in the punch which takes away from the line but we still get the point. I like when folks punch in their set up. The punch itself was nice but had like I said that typo -I’m assuming it was a typo - took away from it because it didn’t flow right. Overall it was good)
Read your content! Against me this where the chapter end
Street sweeper-Ya sound get edit..I fire then clean up flow-mix & mastering
(This is a solid flow flip. Pretty good.
You get it soon...The 12 rising up on me! Its close to noon
Bullets in his throat! I can change the voice on flow like he autotune!
(Grimey! This was dope. And once again, punching in the set up again elevated the bar)
Try finishing a bar without "like a", shiit hed rather face a hollow tip
More likely to "sigh an hide' while we just wish hed man up an swallow it
(Lol good opener. The wp isn’t perfect but got the job done here. Also Flow is really good at using personal angles and a part is because you throw little jabs and hints at what angles your going to take. You didn’t it here with the ‘try finishing a bar w/ like a’. It’s like jabbing a nigga to set up a right hook or running the ball to set up play act)
N he jacked the URL style like that shit is the hardest
but Diversion just distract us from the fact that hes garbage
(This is cool. Straightforward but the wp came off effortlessly. I like the angle as well)
Dy or dyna? Either way D ya girl works mine as if she was earning
hit it back and forth til i finished an Federa ball as if it was him who was serving
(Lol I’m giving fed her a ball a pass. This was okay)
Real recognise real an tbh i dont care for what i see
We not alike... thats jus what you use to connect all your wack ass similies
(This is a good angle. There’s not really many angles to take on Dynamicz just based on what I’ve seen so this is a good angle to take - just breaking down his style. The punchline itself was simple, but got the job done. Good line)
Knew this be a easy kill, ive got the shovel ready to boot
I'll throw a box over you at the end of the round LIKE crash bandicoot
(The “LIKE” floored me lol. The punchline was nothing crazy. I couldn’t remember if they put boxes over your head at the end of round but I’m taking your word for it. I thought it landed)
Refreshin style gtfoh faggots what the fucks the attraction
He got his hands on so many Likes it could bring up a list of Facebook Reactions
(The punchline wasn’t crazy but once again, this is a good angle to take. Decent.)
You a faggot nobody, til today id never peeped your battles son
Not me to ghost one, so im exposing your whack ass lines like he did to Boston
(This was a light jab. Punch was basic but landed)
Run my pen game aggressive u cant touch me as a writer
This his first slip as a fighter, so if Diner rating high its only on Trip Advisor
(Good closer. I liked this)
Really dope contenders match! The battle was very close and didn’t disappoint. You got Dynamicz who is a straight punch who’s starting to develop a lot of intri***ies with his pen against Flow who is becoming a master at creating and attaching personal angles.
This was highly debatable imo and another case of do you take consistency vs standout moments. Dynamicz has a lot of heavy punches and it’s like the got heavier and heavier as the verse progressed. He did have some misses though. Flow on the other hand was extremely consistent. Didn’t count any misses and he was taking angles and jabbing at them throughout.
I think the difference maker in this was the fact that I think not having any big angles to attack hurt Flow. Flow did a good job of attacking the angle he had but it wasn’t an extremely harsh angle. I think part of the reason Flow’s able to upset he vets is because if you have dirt on you he’ll attack it hard. Like I said though his was really competitive but i think Dynamicz edged slightly.
Mvgt Dynamicz
Dope battle. Salute to both you guys.
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