Badgerdick
Join Date: Jul 2015
Location: Showdown City
Posts: 2,633
Battle Record: 11-2
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Originally Posted by BodySnatcher
LOL.
Lennox, this anime fag sold out Joey to Roc with you, that’s crazy kid
I bet ya Dame Dash for thinkin you can carry Bleek as long as Jay-z did
I liked this, sure the reference is a little dated and I imagine it has been done but it works and applied to the opposition so can't fault it
There’s money on y’all head so we’ve been waitin on this bout all week
4 the right price...income bullets to there chest leavin their outcome bleak
This one needed something more to make it really hit harder, the outcome Bleak is a nice idea, just needed executing differently maybe to make it pop
& if outcome Bleak…I bet this right cross will let his soul be healed
He’ll be knockin on heaven’s door while Lenox overlooks a Holyfield
I liked the Holyfield idea off Lenox name, this was good and creative
Lenny...You say you trynna turn it around, kid try to market a better story
Still I'm behind you...This animal spraying from the back jus marking my territory
LOL seemed more swag and flow in all honesty but I fucked with this and not seen it done before so it gets props from me!
You been getting groomed on kik, there's no other way to call it buddy,
Now you March to the beat of a different drum since Bongo left you walking funny
Dope shit
This sloppy faggot can't help you, ya'll lames won't do a single thing
Never had a line worth shoutin about, ain't gone change under Bleaks bingo wing
Again this was cool, enjoyed Bleaks bingo wing
Most Hated? Soon we won’t be able to I.D. these pair of contenders
I got 4 clips on the waist & 2 shoulder straps like a pair of suspenders
LOL again this one came off swaggy but I can def fuck with it. Dope
Who let y’all in this tourney? People get cold chills if we comparin ya
Cuz y’all look more outta place than a Jamaican bobsled team in America
LOL yep liking the comedic stuff in here
Think about it, if Len lookin to learn from the best, who would mention ya name?
This desperate lame got some Loose Logic but kid ain't got no sense or No Shame
I get the Loose Logic being his friend or some shit but only know of No Shame the transgender battler, not sure entirely how that ties in so think this may be missed by me sadly
You didn't see me n body comin, your closeness is awkward for the rest of us
They could say here you landed the odd couple but that's more than fuckin generous
Cool
Lennox, I bet if we tussle you'd buckle & B for this scuffle you need muscle
Cause right now ya'll more of a push-over than Jordan's last shot on Russell
Nice current reference and punch, first I've seen
Lenox invited his cavalry but they already Army with a super llama
& when it spits bullets shred thru these jarheads like a gunfight in Futurama
Jarheads/Futurama is dope, first I've seen that done. Lots of creative lines in this. Good wording also. You blend well together
plus ya momma fat.
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Originally Posted by bleak
BS cool but fake joog would get flattened, no sense of humor having English muffin cuck fgt ass needs to gtfo we don't accept you
Really E.
The pizza boy? Here's some meds: you formed tags w/ a bore fag
Lace this thread & snatch Body, Masking YOUR Problem w/ chloroform rags
okay
Fake joog w/ smooth edits, tossing his partner's bars in a urinal
"20-24" then posting more Chopped Body verses than Lars' journal
LOL have to enjoy this
Name's bleak, but Serta YOUR type. Purple got me grilling opps
Chop fresh out the Box, Spring loaded to rest they heads on Pillow tops
Yeah this one was nice
I dice prey, toss bits and pieces out the window on the ride back
Type of shit make 1 Body look like Memorial counts in Chiraq
SwagNFlow type bar but I enjoy it
Bombz strapped to Body w/ suicide vests on, crying's worthless.
In other words: locked together & on OUR word, they dying virgins
This is cool, felt it could have used a little more to make it even harder though tbh
We the splash bros, snatch hoes from range while these lame's beggin
Get'n numbers while y'all miss w/ 24 straight 3's like Houston in Game 7
Nice current reference here
Cut snatch’s throat open. leave En’s brain blown out clean.
A shot’ll leave his dome in ya lap.. - That's a Bang Bros scene.
Fire. Real nice execution too.
gat loaded, I’ll leave both of u nobodies on FOX News.
The smoke’ll put ur name in the sky like airplane messages in cartoons.
Great conceptually but the wording was overkill lol Maybe only needed airplane messages to get the point across
Talk shit & eat a clip, im quick to bust toys.
keep that bitch on my waist, squeezing more ratchets in ya face than NBA Youngboy
Again more swaggy, I can fuck with it as both teams did the same thing
My knuckles do damage to pussies, but not to mention.
I got black thoughts, I’ll give u a hard beat till ur soul hits the 9th dimension.
This was cool
dumb faggot enbombz, swaying before the verse? u ain’t a sheer veteran’.
I’ll put the banana clip to his grill, just to give bombz a better idea of extensions.
Okay
cred merkd u then let me have a turn, those gun bars had u takin’ shells.
.. But from the looks of that battle.. body already dug his own grave himself.
Alright
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This is a lot better a battle than most will think it's gonna be, I think you showed something different here, more swag to battles is definitely something I could get behind. Bang Bros was probably LOTB for me BUT I came away feeling like Body and Bombz had the better overall verse in terms of consistency and shit I liked, better execution to their lines and a couple more creative concepts like the Holyfield and Jarheads that I felt
Vote - Body and Bombz
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