[Diablo]

A lil sum'n sumn

What in the entire FUCK. thissa holy disgrace
Names 69': Well it suits you : u got pussy ridden all over yur face

I thought this was dope tbh, fresh to me, though 69 and written all over your face stuff been done before (I've seen a cum line used with written all over your face previously too) but the pussy ridden made it a fresh enough flip for me to like it. I can see why some may not, though, if I look at it objectively.

Who gave you a mic. Fool, Yur lame & its trife
How u go from looking like a foreign exchange student to not goin 2 school a day in ur life

This was okay, nothing too hard hitting or comedic just a straight observational insult that worked for me.

Recent pic is telling . Trusttt, his brodies aware
U tell someone 2 to "go against the grain ' : & its jus ur homie combing your hair

Again, kind of cool, can see some people not liking the idiom of going against the grain but it was cool.

You gettin no ass . Bro you smell of inferior
Cropped half the bitch face out the pic but we can still tell that she's hideous

Nice observation away from the obvious insults, maybe people didn't give it credit as it insulted her more than the guy in question here though? Perhaps.

Listen i dont envision that youll ever even sniff the top
That scarf is an Infinity Knot: like wen ppl ask if I listen to the shit u drop

This one didn't really work all the way for me. I get it, for sure, but it would be infinitely knot and so I could maybe see Incredible marking you down for that.

That first pic is death . Gawdd homie, its morbid
& its clear that THATS a little broad : well my nigga, so is ur forehead

Again, I like this perosonally, seen stuff done with 'broad shoulders' etc before but little broad was a newer twist on it I guess. I fuck with it. Light jab.

why that picture though? the moment is harddly important
Now presenting:" the first nigga in our family to NOT get deported"

Straight clowning, I'm keen on it but obviously everyone's different and in this era of wordplay heavy/gun bars maybe it has gone overlooked? Preference could be headed in a diff direction?

That relationship weird. Its dumb scary, my mans
Here's the naked truth. She's holding you like she's the one wearin the pants

Same with the last line really, bit of clowning with not a lot more going on in the line to tie it in. I can fuck with it but I preferred the line before tbreal

That 2nd pic is tragic :bro stop the despair
Can't see the Game w/ Hanson: but mmm BOP nigga ur rocking their hair

Again, this one hit but lightly, wording didn't really give it that zing it needed to make it pop. I like it, it's just missing something.

Fact u talked shit to him? That's a blatant arrest
Ur not raps Heir Apparent you jus need to b deprived from taking a breath

Not too keen on this one in truth, especially as it's the closing line, I'd have probably scrapped this in truth.


The verse started off with some dope shit, couple good comedic lines that maybe weren't to everyone's tastes and also felt rushed wording wise like you keyed it together and I know you've been on a roll with those lately but I think if you had taken the time to word a few of these more strongly they would have had more impact, taking them from a jab to a haymaker or three.