if Rounds hit the air, they'll have me in the central for bookin
red dots peporoni his face.. bitch I got a different Metal for Cookin
(Lmao this is funny. My only critique is ‘Metal for cooking’ in the shooting meaning is kind of a stretch...you can cook someone or cook him but you wouldn’t call it cooking. Prob sound nitpicky but I feel like you get what I’m saying. Anyways I liked the bar)
I'll hit wit the six - can't Weave these wen they spit out the mac
black bitch instagram pic.. the Shot 'll have ur wig on ur lap
(Yep. I like this)
spray the shotty route, or a hook get u knocked out ur boots
this is how you Lay Body out.. n bitch i'm NOT a massuese
(Simple body flip. Still hit, but just a jab imo)
i got ?'s deep inside - ur the epitome of wack n here's the reason why
how Finnys Pizza Toppings get in the tourney b4 the fuckin pizza guy?!
(Lol this is funny. Them niggas really gotta team up on brothers keeper 2 lmao)
As soon as Cred seaweed...I’ma sneak up & give his throat gills...this knife chaotic
Dump his body like Dexter...call me Wes
Anderson...nigga I’ll turn your Life Aquatic
(This is a good opener. You did a lot here. ‘Soon as Cred seaweed’ was a forced tie in imo and didn’t go with the rest of the bar, but the other tie ins were nice. The actual punch wasn’t too crazy but it worked. Overall nice bar)
Im RAW but I don’t need ringside commentators...Cred will be clutchin in his jaw
But it’ll do more than Sting when this Hitman leaves a Hacksaw Duggan his skull
(This is fire. The hacksaw duggan wp was dope.)
It’ll be a horror film when I kill`em & keep shooting while his spirit is inclining
& I wont stop pulling the trigger...my finger will look like Danny’s in The Shining
(This is fire as well. You set this up perfect and I liked the spirit tie in)
NBL 11 ya got blue up, Marge’s hairdo...then ya sent Doh to Orc for y`all to pair up?
But it won’t help...if a high yellow nigga is rockin a crown...it’ll be ya avatar’s hair cut
(This was okay imo. The concept is bad but this is perfect execution of a corny concept. Paradoxical, but the blue up/marge, doh/dough, then the avatar thing all worked from in a technical sense and they tied into each other well. Then it was a good personal angle as well. It’s just the whole simpsons then the avatar thing came off corny to me. Hard to judge this bar but I’m going to go with okay)
Dope battle fellas. Straight bar fest.
Even though both these guys are straight punchers, it felt like a styles clash to me. Cred’s punches are very straight to the point, shorter bars, with a dope cadence. You instantly get the bar and they sting instantly.
Body Snatcher is a puncher as well but he has longer bars, more subtle tie ins, and a added layer of complexity. On the other hand, his flow isn’t as smooth his punches don’t always instantly sting like Cred.
This was a tough one to judge. Cred was more consistent imo. He had no misses, his lowest low was higher than Body Snatcher’s lowest low. Body Snatcher had the lowest low with the Simpson’s bar, but also had two very heavy punches including lotb imo.
Like I said this one was tough to judge but I’m slightly edging Body Snatcher on this one. In a punchline heavy battle he had an added layer of complexity in his punches and I thought his Shining line and WWE lines helped him edge it.
Mvgt Body Snatcher
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