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Thought this would be an easy vote, was wrong. Voting on tablet so I'll give a quick little rundown

Body really the only thing add a whole that sours me to your verses is the line length. Feel like you can fit your concepts in w/o having to stretch it out. This was consistent and I was halfway into most of it but kept disconnecting mid line to make sure I want missing anything. Might just be my inclination to keep my lines inside of the site's margins, Nik has had success for like 50 years now stretching his lines.

Cred, this was an off week but I can see where u may have sold ur opponent short. That being said, I did like a couple. Lay body was kinda awkward but it was to the point. I liked the pizza toppings shit. Dont worry Body this shit is getting old quick lol but i liked it here. Cred ur first two seemed like a key, just some generic hood shit but the tone was right. Looking forward to advanced gun bar lessons next week

V/Cred but your heels were on fire in this one