Orc & Cred say Dynasty's godsend, See ur family tree is dying to fall
I'll take everyone that can relate to you...& let their bloodline the wall
(Pretty good. The punch wasn’t crazy but the tie ins were good. The ‘Orc and Cred’ part didn’t tie in well but everything else tied in nice)
You got killed on FN easy, barely decent when it's a quick key..
funny.. That's what ya wifey beggin' for... everytime that's she's w/ me
(Not bad. Quickie is kinda a stretch)
u cry @ every vote. Say they don't reflect what your worth,
we all got to see Dyna sore pussy last week.. like a prehistoric birth
(I’m not really feeling this one. Dinosaur is too elementary imo)
bitch we get it, u love guns. A Napoleon complex makes u pull triggers..
Dynamite keep the lama close...just so Tina can 'EAT THE FOOD' quicker
(Lol this was funny. Coulda elevated it a bit more if the ‘eat the food’ part had some sort of tie in but I liked it. Good personal angle as well)
In closing, ur soft as cake kid. 0-2 choke artist who can't call it leverage..
miCz hard? Yaaah, shuuuuure... i'll let u know when I need a cold beverage
(I like the line but his name would be pronounced Micks and not Mikes. I liked the line but I cant get around that it’s a reach)
Disrespect him! Two in his Drop, you convert to bull I let the clip spray
Ditchin with the 17 during school hours! He'll be absent like senior skip day
(Lot going on here - in a good way. Two in his drop/convertible is subtle but good writing. Convertible/convert to bull was reachy but I give it leeway cus it was just in the set up. Ditching with 17 was good. Senior skip day was light for the punch but overall the bar hit)
Home invasion! This wont be a tug of war, watch me tie you to the rope hands first
The wrong word i hang man! Have his body wire to wire-thats a bank transfer
(Good line. Pretty creative. More subtle tie in - I esp liked the wrong word/hangman flip. Nice line)
Your a fraud! Everything about your image speak bad ethics
Face get a new make up! What I draw, altered his appearance--cosmetics
(Okay. This a played concept but cut executed it well for what it’s worth)
Last week I went with personals! Now I'm personally in the field merking
On shore wit the scope to his fade! Blowing off the waves like he windsurfing
(Nice)
You was safe at ya home base, now you went an struck into the wrong route
Bad beginning If the nine ending, I get two sent to a box like a dugout
(Pretty good. The punch wasn’t crazy but all the tie ins elevated it. Didn’t waste a word - that’s good writing)
Good battle. A lot closer than I expected but it was pretty straightforward to judge imo. Both verses were very punch heavy and I think Dynamicz out punches Two. Not to take anything away from Two because he had a good verse but Dynamicz just crafts his punches extremely well. His concepts are creative and he has an added layer of complexity with all the tie ins.
Mvgt: Dynamics
Good showing fellas.
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