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Holy shit, I had forgotten about this piece. Thanks for bumping it JW and I'll return the feed laters. Thanks for the feed and I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Thanks for the read and the feed Darth and @Sharp Nine. (The feedback was cool Sharp, shit like this is what I hoped for when I first dropped it. Criticism is what I'm after, something I can grow on and I think you pointed out shit out well. Dope that it was your 1000th post as well.)
@Lexicon: Dope breakdown and I get everything you're saying here. Characters and character development through my verse have been a thing I have focused on a bit in the AOWL as well, I think I have improved a bit on it. At least this piece did enough to bring something out of you and I really appreciate that you read through it even tho' you didn't like the character, hehe. Even now I can see things I missed and things I still need to focus on after reading the stuff you said. Reading your feed now was probably better than reading it when I first dropped it as it isn't as fresh in memory anymore (if you understand what I'm saying?). Thanks a lot.