[Introvert]

Excellent use of enjambment. Your control of the reader is A+.

"does her gentle lilt ache me again,
or chase in the vein a beat that resounds
of a feeling i've floundered to forget."

Jesus christ.

"the caskets, the cradles, cold are their touch.
serpent-mouth sews itself shut.
skin shed, instead: change is the nobler of loves:

PFTTT.

I wish there was something I could offer in the form of constructive feedback, but the wording, cadence, control... it's all there. Excellent drop.