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Old 05-21-2018, 09:57 AM   #19
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I really disliked both verses... dyna didn't hit on any punches... i guess the d'antoni line was ok... body had the worst flow I've read in years... body had much fresher concepts, but the lines were stretched and hard to put any concept of a rhythm to...

both were terribly worded... body in particular... took the sting off of any chance for a punch.

I just don't understand how the punches still didn't hit when both ppl threw flow and rhythm in the trash can...

I guess vote - Body cause I could see where he was going with some of it, and the concepts weren't awful... but this just wasn't a good read...
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