crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
(Yeah this is fire. You almost caught the short end of the stick cus Enbomz had the same Isreal wp, but the Palestine wp is nice and the tie ins were good)
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
(Dang you was on to something but the punch fell a little flat. The set up alone was almost Don Demarco worthy with the Judge lawyer flip but like I said punch wasn’t quite there. This was decent)
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
(Pretty good. Probably prob could have used a better phrase that had a more direct tie in to the video than ‘30 come off the hip’ but you had a lot of tie ins)
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
(Eh not too bad but felt kinda all over the place. Okay closer)
My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
(Pretty good opener. I liked this one)
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
(Sorry I didn’t catch this one)
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
(Simple concept but I liked he punch. Good line.)
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
(Lol dope way to close. I think the fact that bleak went all gun bars and he fact that it’s Ramadan made this hit hard lol.)
This was a good battle esp. for only 8 bars. Bleak’s were a bit more complex but I think that was a double edge sword. I liked all the tie ins but they also made a couple of his punches seem a bit scattered b/c his wording wasn’t extremely crisp. I do think he set up his punches a bit better than Zelph though and his concepts were a bit more ambitious and as a result came off as more creative. I think Bleak slightly edged this one.
Mvgt: Bleak
Good showing from both of y’all though. Salute.
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