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Eŋg · 05-20-2018, 05:55 PM

those first 8 lines are kind of brilliant. i didn't enjoy the rest as much, because you set me, as a reader, up for a sheer drop, but that's one way of being victim to your own success. alyssum in her palms was pretty.

05-20-2018, 05:55 PM	#9
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	those first 8 lines are kind of brilliant. i didn't enjoy the rest as much, because you set me, as a reader, up for a sheer drop, but that's one way of being victim to your own success. alyssum in her palms was pretty.