Yet, you read all of my stuff. Lol.
And "bland"?
First off, I would have mopped you in that AWOL season you won.
Secondly, your mechanics and technical skills are borderline wack. Although, maybe you've improved them over the last few years?
Thirdly, the only good thing about your writing is that it's descriptive (although, often it's overly and to a fault).
Lastly, for all your novel-esque phrasing and wording your verses are still devoid of entertainment, trite, long winded as hell and boring to read. Your words lack soul. You can write. Technically. But, nothing about your writing is original. Just a bunch of rehashed concepts you ripped from novels and films and struggled to make the words fit in a rhyming formate. Say what you want about my writing, but "bland"???? Coming from you???lol. Pan-man just stop. You're a snooze of a writer with an ego that you don't deserve.
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