[PancakeBrah]

Lol.

I caught every rhyme, and recognized/picked up the "flow" of the piece no problem. It wasn't rocket science. I was even able to do this without lighting a candle in the middle of a dark library and speaking it aloud in hushed tones. I'm not just skimming pieces and writing random opinions for feed. Read it multiple times. Unlocked the God Tier Inception-Level schemes after decades of quiet practice. The rhymes were solid, the piece was solid. But I stand by saying it wasn't some crazy tour de force of technical skill. Savage when I belch is awful. EVEN IF the scheme was creative, which it wasn't, the rhymes were all tired. The content was standard fare. It takes some amount of skill to write something like this but I just react a bit when you have all these people gassing you up with 10/10's and OMGZ GOAT for a pared down swag and flow joint. This suffers the same thing as your topical do. The technical magical wizardry you claim to have doesn't cover up the milquetoast content that would be innovative in a bygone era. Everything seems out of time and these random people with Z and misplaced capital letters in their name all seem like 15 year old Eminem stans or something. Its repulsive really. If you want an uninterrupted feed of random fuckoffs saying you're the best open mic writer on the site I'll stop feeding your pieces, since every time I post something less than glowing you have some dumbass retort. Japanese Whiskey was good. There ya go. Maybe I'm focusing too much on the math. Or maybe I'm just missing your magic. Lol.