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Old 05-19-2018, 04:11 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by bleak
crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
Isreal/Is real plays are over kill, like done to the max flipped every which way. Even with your tie in - it doesn't help because you worded it terribly. I mean, Palestine was a reach, man.
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
Didn't do nothing here. Concept was ok at best but the execution did nothing. It was mad soft... NO substance.
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
Meh, not feeling this one either... Not creative gun bar... I don't fuck with gun bars like these other idiots do... They died a long time ago for me.
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
This was wack. I think you would have went in a better route with a played plan B concept, IMO... This was just wack not to mention cleft bars on him are beyond played. Only Bags and his son Destroyer enjoy them because they enjoy making fun of him lol...
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Originally Posted by Zelph
My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
Gun Bar, wack to me.
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
Another one using a disco vegan faggot as the pun, not feeling it... Not really effective to me... and indirect.
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
Metal to mouth and braces has been flipped a million times back in the early days of text battling... In fact when gun bars were mainly popular during that era of text you saw these flips often.
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
LOTB, good bar.
v/Zelph - Actually had a bar I enjoyed. Wasn't really feeling bleak verse at all. Had maybe 1 or 2 concepts but failed to effectively execute them.

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