Lets speak some facts! You been putting in some work, I applaud you for that
You ain't snatched a body yet, but got awarded for snatching pizzas off the rack
(Lol this was pretty funny. Decent)
Said congrats to Finny on his raise, then said he should upgrade..shut the fuck up
Before Manager you was a worker taking orders, whipping the customer crust up
(This didn’t hit as hard to me. Prob shoulda did a bit more with the angle)
Keep the rocket in motion, fast pace w/ the routes, I let the trey cook
Go Iso w/ the gun, teach him to play 1 on 1 w/ the shots--Mike D'Antoni playbook
(I like the concept but the punch wasn’t as crisp as it needed to be. Made the line seem kinda scattered)
Clean sweep, 3 Ninas singing with me...TLC when im on the creep
Get him elevated, this trio make him jump from a standstill--you literally vertical leap
(This was pretty good. I liked the 3 Nina’s TLC for a set up. ‘Make him jump from a standstill’ isn’t really a phrase you’d use outside a bar (to my knowledge), but I see where you were going. Overall when you combine it with the punch in the setup I thought it was pretty good)
If I snatch a body! Ya kid nap, break in the house while ya bitch pussy popping
Shots at the entrance! His head leanin w/ his ear to the door--now he eavesdropping!
(Grimey! This is dope. You set it up well. This was your best line imo)
I keep a pipe hidden but at warp speed, it'll lift you to another world, this ain't shit to me
I'll have you runnin from left to right...& dodgin shells...so Bowser before I split you in 2D
(I liked the scheme. You did a lot with it but the punch wasn’t quite there. A D flip prob isn’t good enough to be the punch. There was a lot of good word associations and tie ins though.)
You see if He Got Game...I got a rifle muzzled like a blue nose & it's so long I call it Gonzo
Like Denzel...myyyy nigga yelled Jesus & ran to the corner so I hit him in stride like Rondo
(Im typically a fan of 90s hood movie references lol but this one was kinda all over the place. I thought it was weird that the punch didn’t incorporate He Got Game since that’s what you was setting up. I liked he yelled Jesus and ran to the corner part, and muzzle like a blue nose. I take points off though cus I thought it was all over the place.)
That's a pic diss? Fuck that was weak, you'll leak when I leave a knife stuck in your cheek
Pull it out & stab you again...it'll look like I'm showin kids the basics to brushin your teeth
(I didn’t care for this. “Pull it out and Stan you again” doesn’t really fit cleanly for “brushing your teeth”....cus you not really stabbing yourself)
Ugly fuck, an elephant man would pay to see you...this rapper features are the most gory
& if your campfire shots...then you will get your face lit up like a flashlight & a ghost story
(Pretty dope. I liked the campfire wp. Only critique is Ive heard very similar flash under his chin/flashlight/ghost story flips. None worded like yours though so it was still dope.)
Proof? I'll bring a body bag to see if D fitted like a Detriot hat but I won't just give D caps
This glock will give D-12 but before that, you'll see this perp`ll peel out like if Em relapse
(I like this. A LOT of here and did it smoothly. Lot of tie ins (Proof/D12/Eminem/Detroit then Detroit/D caps/ then Purple pill/relapse). Impressive scheme. Good closer).
Good battle. I thought both came with it. Dynamic is a solid pincher while Body Snatcher has been able to put together some really impressive schemes. I thought dynamic was slightly more consistent (his misses weren’t as bad) but Body Snatcher had some high highs. The difference for me was Dynamicz punches landed a bit harder. Body Snatcher has a lot of lines had good concepts, schemes, and tie ins but the punch wasn’t quite there.
I got Dynamicz in a close one.
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