Engrossing read. I read it in my head, but was still able to pick up the rhythmic pace of the flow. Which was near if not completely flawless. Your wording was also pretty good. Just maybe one or two lines that could have been tweaked. However, I think the overall content and lyrics were really strong. There are no shortage of pieces about child homicides and death, here or anywhere else. But your take on the topic was compelling and captivating. I dug the approach. I'm out now eating and drinking with friends so l'lI keep it short. This was dope. Salute.
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