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Old 05-17-2018, 08:13 AM   #8
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do NOT pursue me.. ya gf's hot & screwy with a camera sayin “cop some nudies”..
..got photos Balls-deep inner twat & booty, with a ‘White Film, on the Sack’ like the Plot of Rudy
good open
i drop it truly.. pick ya poison - choked & scarred or smoked & charred..
..faggot not only to do I go so hard, i always keep 'at least 3 Misses’ like a vote from Bar
other than calling him a faggot, where's the diss here?
you may wanna duck right now before i dump five rounds when I bust nine's loud..
..yaaa i'm talkin like a tough guy pal, cuz being dope is ‘2nd Nature’ like the Upside Down
clever, but again... where's the diss?
don't touch my crown, when i target & maul it's PURE carnage in brawls..
..they say Northern Lights is the hardest to haul.. but still that ‘Dro-gon Get Blazed’ no Dracarys involved
again... the punch here is that you smoke weed..? grats on that... no diss though
ain't got the heart or tha gall.. u’ll taste the nine right before i take what’s mine..
..& shortly after i retire as a great with shine.. i’ll smoke deGrasse w/ Neil, baked n’ high talkin space & time
did I miss something? is this a topical battle?
don’t waste your rhymes.. my lines are better, spines get severed when it’s time for cheddar..
..honestly i'll be in my prime forever, with 'Full-bodies in my Cellar' like a Wine Collector
listen, I can handle boast lines, but you haven't dissed him since the first bar
shoot lead at u herbs.. flow melodic so demonic straight deadin you nerds..
..Tony Soprano season one, ahead of the curve.. i'ma 'Boss, Poolside throwin Bread at some Birds'
sigh... again... no diss... this one wasn't even particularly clever
so fall back fast… the Rugers always goin mental s’why i called that Spazz..
..& once I finish sippin on this Malbach Razz, i’m throwin rappers in front'a Coltranes for talkin All that Jazz
didn't like this, wasn't a strong closer, and didn't diss the opponent

Blue... there's a bunch of clever bars here... flow was on point... but you only attempted to diss your opponent, with a punch, on one bar... the opener... I reread the thread thinking maybe I missed it and this is like a swag battle or something. If this was going on an album or something... ok... I liked a lot of the flips... but you can't win a fist fight by telling your opponent how much weed you smoke and how great you are fighting... you have to fight... as a verse, however, it's clearly better constructed and a better read...



des is ridiculous yo. don’t have to try to be def
got that perpendicular flow. So it’s only right that u left
this just doesn't make any fucking sense... perpendicularity is how close to a 90 degree angle something is... could have called hi ma square or something here, wouldn't have been original or anything but it at least would make sense
got to brawl w/ this asshole? Nik, are u serious???
u can call me Picasso. Cause I’m done with blue period.
I think this could have been worded better... but it's a really dope reference for a nameplay
u were told to fear him in scrolls found locked in ancient older pyramids
Wolverine with a vibranium upgrade and a shot of super soldier serum kids
um... ok... no diss, flip, or... why is this here?
I was already smarter before I upgraded my hardware. It’s hard being the martyr
Grab ur face & scream when hit w/ the transmutation beam from my Asgardian armor
...put....down....the...comic...book...... step away
u got no horse in this race. No doubt u try & fucking hurt me
but I’ll only see blue blood like I’m in the crowd at the Kentucky Derby
meh, wording isn't good, not a particularly clever punch or reference
My logic? If it jumps off - it gets stopped quick.
I’m caustic. I’m John Wick if he just shot dicks.
there's no diss here... I don't know why I like it, but I do... hmm
I bleed venom that goes airborne as soon as it touches nitrogen
so if he’s lucky enough to slice the skin, the faggot’s fucked if the knife goes in
filler
ridicule. I call him x-man cause I’m not sure he IS a dude
& they’ll call me Beast when they see me use a single shot to get rid of blue
good closer, decent concept

Destroyer... had a couple really creative name plays, but there was like... a weird amount of comic book filler in the middle of it... I was irritated with the lack of disses in Blue's verse and was looking for a way to vote in your favor... but there's 3 obvious filler bars and your opener doesn't make any fucking sense...


VOTE - Blue Bayou... he won a fist fight by telling his opponent how much weed he smokes and how great he is... I wanted to vote for Destroyer because he brought a battle verse to the battle... but it was a bad one... so... just for lyrical quality, Blue gets the vote
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