The subject-matter wasn't well defined. It's sociopolitical, but kind of all over the place. Then again, I guess that hences at the definition of a freewrite, right? In any case, I appreciate that the scheme was different from the norm. It was kind of slanty, but still rhythmic. It works. Pretty fluent I suppose. Lyrically you were on point. Definitely enough to hold my attention for the entirety of the read. Which is always a +1 in my book. I like your style. However, I personally would be very interested in seeing what you can do with a full fledged topical or story based concept. Just out of curiosity. You got some skills, bro. Keel expouding and most importantly, keep posting. Peace.
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