dayum. talk about short and sweet. this was really good man. super enjoyable to read. coulda kept reading more like this, but no filler , got to the point. i have zero bad to say about it, feeling it for sure. i liked when u incorporated the second rhyme scheme with bro snapped old trap etc.. on its own very simple but combined with the main explain my language scheme made it way more complex and dope... also on second thought the sick as aids is is probably the most played line ever so minus props for that but other than that this is dope lol. keep posting man and i'll keep peepin. hit me back with some feed on my times up piece if u get a chance
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