[sral]

This seemed more battle-orientated than we've seen from you previously. I guess that BAL sign-in got you thinking on more a punchline type hype recently, huh?

Style-wise I'd suggest you conform more to the setup/punch style favoured here if you're looking to win battles. If you aren't and just want to see how you fare, then sure, stick with this but I don't see it winning you many. The format is essentially tried and tested already for text battles, very few that do it differently win enough to make it the norm. You may wanna beat that in mind. Maybe not. They don't care so much about multies and technical skill in text battles, it's more about the actual punchlines and creativity. For what it's worth I actually liked that get over yourself like forward flips line even though, again, I can see some people here hating on it for it being so simple with just the similie used and blah blah blah haha!

Keep that pen moving!