I find your flow choppy @ times, if you write to a beat that obviously makes sense especially when Idk what you writin' too...I copy & pasted it then structured it to how I'd pen it up & it was alot smoother...the first bar is flames, the rest was really solid...I'm not sure if I've read anythin' from you before but yeah, first impressions be impressive man.
Stay upwards.
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