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Old 05-13-2018, 08:47 PM   #13
Jabari Black
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So both these niggas can rap, it just y’all gotta adapt to the battle style. Lyrically the verses sound good but they sound like an open mic verse more than a battle verse.

Out of the two verses I thought exis had the better flow. Also you had a lot of jabs mixed in so it felt more direct. Broken had the standout line imo - the finger her with cheese doodles was funny to me. Unfortunately, he rest of the verse veered off track and felt more like a stream of consciousness (once again would be fine for open mic) than an attack on an opponent. Overall I think Exis took this.

Mvgt Exis
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