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Old 05-13-2018, 01:25 AM   #7
El Muffin
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Calm down or your bitch`ll get American History X…cuz I can’t truly fathom
Why she’d call JB Smoove...now her mouth is gonna Curb your Enthusiasm
(did a jb smoove /curb line on joe boston..this flip was ehh ok to me..on the bitch angle)
Jabari’s outfit is to bear arms but this is a bear trap to prove he can’t bare shit
If he gets a Lil Scrappy, I’ll put the paws on`em, beat his ass with my bare fist
(nah not fw with the scrappy reference..is that scrappy like the rapper or scooby doo scrappy..either way not fw it)
For the Bucks, I’ll be in MIL looking for Duke. Desert eagle safari out the zoo
Red dot headshot, he’s a one & done, that’s how you take Jabari out the Blue
(this was nice tho. i caught the one n done..jabari out the blue/duke tie ins)
AK lift him up, don’t give a fuck, hop in the whip like I’m about to pick him up
The way I roll up & smoke J, this nigga might think it was Cred that lit him up
(omg no the smoke J/joint shit is super played..points for the roll up part leading from the setup but noo)
I’ll leave my car park...bring a longer barrel & let the whole nine-yard spark
A shot in the dark`ll leave this black panther dead...tongue out like an aardvark
(ehh)
When I left Jabari’s knee cap...he Bledsoe much now he’s balling on welfare
& to be Giannis he tried to defeat me…but ended up with his third ACL tear
(passable. kinda dig this ..cool word association in the setup..bledsoe, etc)

m in the whip with the toys near me - itchin to spray the lead/
Soon as I put eyes on em...I’m putting arms on Body like Mr. potato head/
(kinda played but u did alot here..put eyes on him/ arms on body..i thought this was a pretty cool play on a really old concept)
He rap like he from projects but the .40 prove it’s nothing thuggish bout him/
I’ll let this big Wesson spray n give his mid Section 8 like public housin’/
(ok)
I bet you and that Finny bitch be kickin’ it...sharing pizza recipes or some silly shit/
I let the semi spit and leave ‘Fin on top of Body’ - no fishy shit/
(eh..would of linked in something other than the phrase.."no fishy shit" but as is its ok)
On Team USA you was the weakest link so I see why y’all niggas quit/
They saw them trash bars you sent and said “never mind, forget it bitch”/
(lol...)
Mini Smith - It’s like Incredible’s mag when I confront this hoe/
That mean I grab the little cannon cus you don’t really want the smoke/
(huh)
They’ll bodybag you after I put the blade to ya dome and stab you/
I’ll get this chicken served with his noodle red like a ragu/
(nah)

i got jabari in a close one...thought bodt had 4 lines i really liked..but the rest kinda left much to be desired..with maybe one more ok line

jabari had 4 i liked but less misses...like complete misses..had some ok spread throughout,,that ragu shit was legit lazy n a throwaway bar tho that shit will get u murdered outchear

v/jabari
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