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Old 05-12-2018, 11:24 AM   #4
ACTIVATE SELF
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I sit around a lot nights, plan and plot

See I’ve mastered rap, been trained to kill
amassed a vast array of skills
The last remaining ill rapper to slay the quill.

My Lord, I’ll pay you to not write more.
Matter fact you’re not SHIT, just SH- because you’ve lost IT.
call me Mr. Clean, a quick sweep and you’re washed kid.
I’ve been slept on as I fly over heads like red eye flights
yet I’d even be up on diss counts in Best Buy guides
I thought I fed this yesterday? Not sure what happened to my post. Anyway, I dug this. You had a fair amount of slick talk, clever puns and cool wordplay all throughout this joint. The flow was also on point. Although, I didn't like the repetition of the two "skills" being used so close together. Other than that. This shit was fly. Props.
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