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Old 05-07-2018, 11:26 AM   #4
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Yeah, perhaps not the most elegant or sophisticated form of poetry I've ever read, but its honesty and raw emotion made it worth the read. You kept it 100 from top to bottom and articulated your feelings/pov very well. I fuck wit it. In particular this line ...

"Have a funeral for my feelings drop my heart in the dirt"

Good shit, M.
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