[Objective]

Zygote: Dude.. First things first and I'm going to be humble with you; Fuck your barbwired cunt's structure. Shit's fucked up to read. It's late and I'm getting tired. I've started to read the same sentence twice a few times, you literally force me to read your shit 1,2 times more than I have to and it interrupted the read while I was at it.

That being said, let's get to the real deal; It's wordy, I like that. You describe shit cwet well with multis that spices your piece up and makes it delicious for the soul, Gordon Ramsey would be pleased by this. Your verbs, adverbs and adjectives dances tango ontop of a speeding trailer as well, makes it exciting to read. Similies and metas on point too, the gargoyle line was dope as fuck, mountain of flesh? Nice!

All in all a dope as fuck piece that's surprisingly on topic. Never mistake motion for action, eh? So that's you're doing, putting things in motion. Well, keep up with it, your so-called evolution will be tested in the play-offs.

Nigma: First phase of your piece was kinda premature; ''Look all these words I just learned to use and how amazing I am at making sentences!'' Yes, indeed, they are very well crafted son! You are soon to master the art of writing incredibly dope shit if you keep it up! But make it rhyme for christs sake! Show the world the power you got inside of you, release the force young one, release what you showed in line 7 and 8 for I know it's inside of you just waiting to burst out in glorious glitter and you'll pee acid on whoever talks shit in your presence. Rhymes is your bullets, yet your weapon lacks a ton of ammo alltho' your opponents fear the weapon in your possession!

More rhymes hermano! The piece so far seems like a sketch to me. A stream of thoughts that goes very well together and tells me something, but it isn't structured to show off lyricism in terms of actual flow and/or intricate rhymescheme, that's the only thing you lack so far tho', everything else is very much enjoyable.

Let's read on; Yes, this is the shit I wanted to read in your first paragraph. This is dope, this is cool, but wtf happened here;

''As constellations teamed I laid awake while sleeping and was deep in space
Galactic scenes were made, it showed me endings and I'd seen creation''
^The word creation doesn't go along with anything? You tricked me! Okay, okay, I get that constellations-creations/deep in space-scenes were made thing, but it kinda fucked things up for me since the transition to your new rhymescheme wasn't that great. It seems to me like you found a cool rhymescheme, but didn't really know where to put it, but you blended it in anyways. It's dope, but the way you presented it wasn't (imo) as it didn't go too well. Which brings us to my next point;

''Saw the head of a large entity spawn which alarmed me
Saw the legs and the arms meet, saw him setup and harden''
^If you're going to switch up the flow, which is cool, by all means, at least make some sort of transition to it or something. You're dragging me in different directions, I'm fine by it as long as it isn't sporadic.

In the end your rhymestructure was sporadic as fuck to me and could have been crafted better. However, the content was strong and dope as fuck. Great imagery, use of words and pretty interesting story. I'm kinda tired tbh and it's a lot of thinking for me to do atm to fully grasp your piece and how it correlates with the topic given. But I understood it as the ''teacher'' and ''student'' being the same person. In the dream the future self goes back in time to teach a former self a lesson. Never mistake motion for action - meaning the action that was done years ago was to put himself in motion later on, shit happened back then or something.

I either got what you were saying, or I didn't. I think I did. Either way, going to read this shit when I'm fully awake later on as well. There's some heavy shit in there.

Vote: Zygote. Kinda hard battle to vote on as I felt both were equal concept wise, but in terms of structure I felt Nigma was lacking a lot, which was weird to me as he's been writing some stellar shit in the S&F tournament. I also felt a shitload of the stuff Zygote was saying, dope as fuck, the words he used fitted well and painted a beautiful abstract picture. Dope fucking battle, but Zygote edged it for me.