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Old 05-05-2018, 03:26 PM   #4
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I dig it. Obviously the flow was the highlight here. It started out spotless and stayed that way from beginning to end. Not only that, but the wording was also very good. The plot of the content isn't really a new one. But you did well in holding my attention and keeping the story progressive. Good stuff JW. I'll be on the look out for your next drop.
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