05-05-2018, 02:01 PM
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#8
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As-salamu alaykum!
Join Date: May 2016
Posts: 8,462
Battle Record: 19-8
Champed
- 1-2 Punch League Season 6
Rep Power: 0
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Originally Posted by Schadenfreude
No friends in competition, LOOK..
My ninja the way you’re constantly overlooked son, so bogus
s’why I call you my ninja - even when you kill someone it goes unnoticed.
Ok. Not heavy but ok.
Huge twin 4-5ths..blowing like chronic when I’m fanning clips,
the 1st could miss, still catch second hand smoke from the cann abyss.
Um, don't know how to feel about this one.
Nerd playing hero, really think you can take this beating kid?
cuz when I BlankMan, you’re getting socked all across the face like he did.
Lol, the 1st black super hero - fuck black panther - he's pussy lol.
Emotional ‘never was’ whose never been told he was great..
Inf late, allowed to it balloon.. my pen bouta make it explode in his face.
Light.
Helped you write stronger punches, yet ya just keep missing,
gave ya lines like the telephone game, but you repeated Chinese Whispers.
Fuck w/ this one.
Ppl swear we got a similar style, Ion’t see whatever they mean
they think ‘birds of a feather’, more like you’ve been under my wing.
Fuck w/ this one as well.
DQ’d for reusing old bars thinking ya dead plays would work,
been recycling that old trash as if yo dumb ass was gon’ save the Earth.
Nah.
0-Never, asians good at math, so lose how u're expected to do
little chink bitch, when Barc said Soo Woo, I thought it was directed at you.
Lmfao - is he asian? Tough, if so...
...BODY
I really hate when you do this, lol...
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Infiltrate
Muff vs Aero was jokes
But ur girl stole the spotlight, she gave me the word
You on Aero dick heavy, right now. His gimmick - not yours.
said my dick was absurd, couldn't fit more than the tip due to girth
tried alll different angles w/ the head til her lip got a sore, that's Muff pic & his verse
Cool concept - execution was wack to me.
my investments reap huge profits, ur broke & fat at obscene rates
ur Yearly Quarter Gains resulted from lots'a vending machine snacks in-between breaks
This was ok, lol.
been a fan of mine for yrs. lie in here & i'll draw that iron near
the tech's Jim West, i'll shoot u to blow off some steampunk....g'head try'ta grind my gears
Nah... This fell flat for me... Concept was good, tho but your execution fell off.
& freuds rhyming aint clever, go hard cuz if u think lighter is better?
it'll open ya world if I bucket & put a german on ice like the ad heineken kegger
Heineken is Holland lager tho... Am I missing something? Googled this shit just in case and was pissed I even googled when I normally DO NOT google...
in the mag said you, me, or cred could champ? that shit's a bit odd
^ it's a leap of logic to include urself. i'ma catch ya at a bad time when u slipshod
This was ok.
bet ur that perv uncle preying on fam, f'kin creep lures 'em home
making those spicy films that 'Star Anise' && i ain't talking exotic cooking shows
Nah.
best prayy while the piece stretch u out like yoga class, & flow wit it
before the shot? sun salutation. after the shot? downward dog, now ya soul lifted
Wordy but light.
fuck that G pop up bite claim! lol i knew this broad needed rescuing
cuz the REAL gender reveal.. is telling us how much of a MAN Amen is in everything
This was dumb corny. Don't even think the quote was needed.
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Pretty close, IMO. I think both had the same amount of misses vs landed punches. However effectiveness makes all the difference which is where I felt SHAD may have edged this one. I just think his cleaner wording/delivery on his concepts helped him out. Inf's structure is weird to me. I think he gets caught up on his own concepts sometimes by over wording or complex'n them. Nothing was really overly complex in this verse but there were a few bars that had some wording issues or where he struggled to execute his concept. He had some dope ideas, he just did not deliver them properly for an example the Muff bump concept. That was dope and even set up well but edns it with that's a Muff pic battle verse or w/e - Like wtf? Mannnnnn, and that closer was cringe, bro. Not even worth the attempt AND ESPECIALLY at the angle you tried to deliver it... Bad.
v/SHAD - with the edge.
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