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Originally Posted by Unfukwitable
This aint Fortnite ya downfall is talkin like u scare’n dudes;
If ya Scars lighten w/ the Lemon squeeze I bet u added Aloe Vera too..
(I get the scar lighten w/ lemon an aloe misdirect....the scars part not fully registering.)
U own a Taser, I’ll snatch it & hit him w/ voltage after;
He’ll Get wired with bolts til every move he makes is Motion Captured,
(Cool taze line but 'wired w bolts' a bit iffy, fresh tho)
I let the Movie plot Star you, now I’m burning all of the Chapters, Hot flashes;
as Blue teirdrops after the battle.. u know Careers get Misty after the Ashes.
(Blue tear drops....honestly this one I didnt get tbh, thought u went in a ford direction)
& w/ Bitches, Ya cash gets accepted but smashing is forever rejected;
She been Curving Spoons tellin u its All in ya mind, its damn near Telekinetic.
(DOPE....lotb so far, now u cookin)
Name droppin s’how u stay a float on the battle scene, i kno its true;
Usin ‘thee @ tricks’ dramatically... & at this point ya death is overdue,
(lol, i used a thee line, this was fresh)
So Fuck makin this a HOF match ima leave u with half a head,
30 Clip & everything is ‘For U Bayou’ a REAL classic thread.
(Cool, fresh np. Couldve executed better but still nice)
Pavement covered in brains I left bits all around ya district;
Bluets scattered everywhere.. Cops lookin like they Flower-picking.
(Okkk. This alright for a np)
Lets bet some Cash if u thinkin that we actually're even,
& When I win U'll get Overcharged & 100% Battery for sleepin.
(Clever but he'll get 100% for sleepin? its fresh spin)
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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
mannn w/ that ezboard bullshit there’s no way ur a threat..
those concepts are so Darnold they just got drafted to play for the Jets
(Simple solid wp, cool personal too)
soon as I saw that shit I KNEW that I would stomp you out..
bitch u’ve had more Grave Encounters in the Archives then a haunted house
(Eh, didnt feel it as much. Packed Graves is so-so lol)
as far as verses go you shouldn’t even bother with one..
anyone sayin ‘Un is Ill’ has simply confused that Kim-Jong father & son
(Lol I liked this, relevant & good hit)
i throw a one-hitter quitter so u don't wanna beef w/ me man..
talk about Nagano what hit’em…..kid’ll wake up thinkin he’s in Japan
(Ok, read nagano a few times)
you get NO pussy cuz all of your advances are borin’..
real talk...any bitch saying Unzip is just referencing ur chances of scorin’
(This ok. Its a tad played on Unfuk but dece)
hyped & gassed – i’m Jack the Ripper but w/ twice the wrath
have nurses Tendon to the Achilles on your right foot I just sliced in half
( The tendon play was alright. Not a huge fan of the overall line but imagery there)
quick strokes slit throats man i'll never choose a gat over swords..
blade to ur gut'll give ya Cormega Seperation like the rapper divorced
(Ok, play is cool. core mega etc)
so go’head & mention last weeks robbery & how I lost to dude..
cuz that personal will have NUTHIN on the Cred Loss this battle has costed you
(Okish closer)
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Damn.. I went back & read but overall im giving it to v-
BLUE BAYOU for less misses.
Unfuk had that curved spoon line which was LOTB to me.
Then FUBU line was dope. First 3 and last werent as sharp imo..
Blue had solid jabs & a few nicee punches..
So depends how u weigh haymakers vs misses
But to me it counted a lil more.
But good read.